
come on in dear soul
tip-away, the pointy shoes of your sole,
slip on these plushy comfortable(s)
let this be a great exchange, (soft note)
our bluesy screams, bend notes while fading
arrange every high-low,
if there’s still a howl in you, unintending,
swallow the breathless mountain, fill the holes
unburdened wholeheartedly
my syrupy- dreams gotta run, but sit in the note
falsetto’s gotta blow
come back tomorrow,
there will be
jazz and gladness
salt of the music
sits quietly in the moonlight
12 responses to “Day19 #NaPoWriMo : Concert Unto Myself”
I love the ebb and flow of music caressing through your verses girlfriend. How tranquil and spiritual! ππΌπ€ππ₯°ππΌ
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thank you girlfriend always so kind πππππππ
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beautiful words and the video as well
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thank you πππππ
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Lovely piece Queen.
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thank you kindly Kiana Donae πππππ
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This is gorgeous! π·πΆ Love this!
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thank you Michele Lee ππππ
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O my goodness — the metaphors just move and evolve like waves breaking on a shore!
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beautiful words thank you Maren πππππ
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This is beautiful, Krissy. I love the way the words flow into each other from line to line. I also love the video (lovely to hear this poem spoken – is that you who is speaking in it?). The image at the top is gorgeous as well. Ellie xx β€ β€ β€
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