Krissy Mosley Ministries

On the Other Side

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Walking down the roads of ease.

Watching trees swell, for rivers pure joy.

Walking underground toward, other sides of life cares

Watching spirits ,wash me- swatching- worlds, tiki tiki –

Walking half-like crazy tryin to find home,

Watching spirits, whisper this way, this way….

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  1. ladypbwiggins Avatar
    ladypbwiggins

    I liked it but I didn’t understand the “tiki tiki” and was that suppose to be “switching” instead of “swatching”?

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    1. Visionariekind Avatar
      Visionariekind

      thank you- this poem spoke to poetic sound and rhythm – my attempt at it- crossing from one world to the other – full of joy … Thank you for this comment -I’m all smiles always a pleasure hearing from you 😉

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      1. ladypbwiggins Avatar
        ladypbwiggins

        Was the tiki tiki representative of the ticking clock during that transition?

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      2. Visionariekind Avatar
        Visionariekind

        yes – I thought of time

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      3. ladypbwiggins Avatar
        ladypbwiggins

        Ok. Keep writing

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  2. lynettedavis Avatar
    lynettedavis

    “crossing from one world to the other – full of joy…” Love this!

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    1. Visionariekind Avatar
      Visionariekind

      awe thank you kindly Lynettedavis

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      1. lynettedavis Avatar
        lynettedavis

        You’re welcome!

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  3. Robert Matthew Goldstein Avatar
    Robert Matthew Goldstein

    very beautiful!

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    1. Visionariekind Avatar
      Visionariekind

      thank you my good friend blessings to you

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