Too quick

for slowing

down

My,

My,  My

blowing wet smoke

burying these shiftless chords

adding up the dead,

                          Forgive us

                                 Our transgressions

                                                   are multiplying

                                                 Forgive us.

6 responses

  1. Maren Avatar

    Oh, Amen, indeed.

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Amen-thank you Maren

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  2. loristrawn Avatar
    loristrawn

    Love this so much. Your poetry leaves me gasping.

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      too kind,thank you-so encouraging you are,Many blessings Loristrawn.

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  3. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
    thefeatheredsleep

    I can hear your voice, the rhyme and cadance the almost panting quality of this

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you…Many blessings to you…

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