Krissy Mosley Ministries

Bathtub Prayers 6

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Carry me through sandy storms, where smiles are real

and stoney hearts are kept

Far away

exchange my hour of disappointment.

Atone now, oh soulless foe.

Carry me to the land where humans grow

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  1. Maren Avatar
    Maren

    Amen! On so many levels … I was near the Connecticut shore when storm Sandy came through … I love the shape of the poem — like a breathing in and out and I love the re-definition of “atone.”

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    1. kneal1 Avatar
      kneal1

      wow-thank you for your kind words-I lived in Camden NJ -when the storm hit…indeed Amen(breathing)

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  2. Demitri Tyler Avatar
    Demitri Tyler

    Sweet ink!

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  3. kneal1 Avatar
    kneal1

    Reblogged this on Mother Bethel Poetry Ministry.

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  4. impostorpawn Avatar
    impostorpawn

    Can your foe take me as well its been a while since i glimpsed a truly naturally occurring smile.
    Powerful stuff

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    1. kneal1 Avatar
      kneal1

      Yes…(the times we live in)

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  5. shunpwrites Avatar
    shunpwrites

    Say it again! Words to live by in a wicked world!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar
      kneal1

      Amen- Shunpwrites…

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