while the wall close in

no waters to pour in my cup

not God or man can change

the hurting tongues

10 responses

  1. shunpwrites Avatar

    There is so much power in your brevity!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Thank you kindly ShunPwrites

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      1. shunpwrites Avatar

        No… Thank you!

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  2. tribalmysticstories Avatar

    Such a beauty! I felt that one too. 🙂 I’m with ShunPWrites.

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      too kind thank you

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  3. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
    thefeatheredsleep

    You are such an incredible magician of word play!!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      oh wow -thankyou kindly!!! I’ll be sure to visit your blog -thank you for the add up as well..many blessings

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      1. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
        thefeatheredsleep

        I was so blown away by your style of writing I spent ages going thru your blog. It is truly a superb place I’ve enjoyed reading you a lot, thank you for being such an inspiring person!

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      2. kneal1 Avatar

        thank you kindly for the sweet remarks,Thefeatheredsleep.
        I must check your book out … Powerful stuff on your blog!!!

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        thefeatheredsleep

        I really appreciate that!

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