Dangerously happy,

flying with fireflies

bugs  And fiery-winds,

Soaring above,Sun’s mindful speed

Beyond thee anchored

wine stained doors

pass that “Great Abyss”

If ever I could hold one prickly round star

but for a moment,

touch a holy-thing.

23 responses

  1. Saneh Pandey Avatar

    Your poem is as wonderful as fireflies 🙂

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Ah-too kind to me, I’m all smiles, thank you and I enjoy your work very much… Saneh Pandey

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      1. Saneh Pandey Avatar

        Thanks to you too dear 🙂 ❤

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  2. charlenedelfin Avatar

    Beautiful poem. It makes the reader feel like she’s also flying with fireflies. 🙂

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you Charlendelfin

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  3. Kiana Avatar

    Yes, very lovely poem indeed. #LoveandInk

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you so much Kiana I be sure to visit your page..

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  4. zikaolofin Avatar

    Wow. Didn’t know Napowrimo has started how do I get on the train? Hope I’m not too late.

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      you are not late, please join in, I’ll link to you the site for Napowrimo http://www.napowrimo.net/about/ you submit your blog site and start posting immedatily also reading the promts helps to get through the 30 day many blessings to you my fellow poet I’ll be sure to check out more of you’re work I know its gonna be awesome…Many blessings

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      1. zikaolofin Avatar

        Thanks so much. Tried already to link my site but not succeeding. How do I get the prompts?

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      2. kneal1 Avatar

        okay click here scroll down and see day 2 prompt keeping going down to see day 1 http://www.napowrimo.net/

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      3. zikaolofin Avatar

        Ok. Thanks a lot. Really appreciate your help.

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      4. kneal1 Avatar

        okay let me know if you find the prompts and try again to go to submit your site and copy and page your wordpress address into the required spaces

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      5. zikaolofin Avatar

        Ok. Will do. Already found the prompts. Will try resubmit my site.Thanks

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      6. kneal1 Avatar

        check National poetry writing month on Facebook as well for the prompts and follow..I hope this helps I felt the same way last year when I wanted to participate so don’t feel late or behind just start what ever day we are on and enjoy the poetry and enjoy all spring brings I think you are a wonderful writer..

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      7. zikaolofin Avatar

        Aww. Thank you sis. You’re a blessing.

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    2. kneal1 Avatar

      also Zika clink on the top of the site that says 30 poems in 30 days for the daily post… http://www.napowrimo.net/about/

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  5. susanissima Avatar

    Beautifully written! I adore, especially, your last stanza!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Thank you Susanissima

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Thankyou for including me I think you are one amazing writer

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