Perhaps the day never breaks,
and night remained king,
Surely we’d scurry about,
in twilight hoping
But suppose our souls wern’t worth saving,
Ah-then
Sunrise,
would be everything

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  1. rhcwilliams Avatar

    This is a poem and a tiny novel at the same time! Love it.

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you Rchwilliams

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      1. rhcwilliams Avatar

        A pleasure, kneal1! You have a gift. Thank you for sharing it! Peace & Blessings, Ruth 🙂

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      2. kneal1 Avatar

        Thanks Ruth, amazing blog ,you’ve been here a while, I could learn a few things from you, hope to stay connected…Many blessings Krissy…

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      3. rhcwilliams Avatar

        You’re so kind, Krissy, but I think you’ve got this inspired poetry thing locked down pretty tight already! I follow a lot of poets, but you’re one of my favorites. Keep in touch! Take care, Ruth

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      4. kneal1 Avatar

        so sweet,I’m all smiles – makes my day…

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      wow very amazing blog you have…

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  3. Fatmawaty Avatar

    You’re a great poet sis kneal! You should tell us about your creative writing process, next Monday! 😍
    Can’t wait to read yours!
    Much loves for you! 💗

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Thank you its in the making for sure..much love my sister…

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      1. Fatmawaty Avatar

        Don’t mention it, dear sis! Wow it’d be great!
        You will post it for us, right? Rosalyn n I have chosen you!
        Thank you for loving me! 💗

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      2. kneal1 Avatar

        I see, indeed and it is truly an honor to have such wonderful talented writers such as you (Fatmawaty and Rosalyn) choose me so you I’m feeling the love thank you sis…

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      3. Fatmawaty Avatar

        You made my day, dear sis! your great word is prayer for me, I hope a few times later I’ll be a good writer like you! Ameen! I too! I love you, I love Rosalyn and all great friends here! WordPress is our world! 😉

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      4. kneal1 Avatar

        you already are Ameen (Ah-woman)…( there is something inside so strong,we got this) For all those who have come before us…much love to you..I love you my sis..

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      5. Fatmawaty Avatar

        he..he, you made me smile, Sis! 🙂 Love you more! ❤

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  4. loristrawn Avatar
    loristrawn

    This poem knocked me out cold. Wow!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      love your words, laughing right now…thank you for this…Loristrawn

      Like

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