This Poem received a lot of positive feedback so Thank you for all the likes and comments ..I’m feeling the love

From One Artist to Another thank you all ,blogging World means so much…

Forย https://mutafariqkhayalat.wordpress.com/ who invited me to do this .I’m not good at these kinds of things such as:links and tech savvy stuff.. ย Thank you

When I grow up Iโ€™ll flyโ€ฆ

with silver cufflinks

chained to the free

engaged for their own sacred prosperity.

When I grow up no need for money man against man

One toward the penny the other toward the land

Rigid cold,freezing

Broken legs ,so learned to fly

Taking to the bitter dirt

I moved sluggishly on my stubby joints

Parting the mud between

the soul and body

when I grow up

Iโ€™ll fly ย โ€ฆ.

Thanks everyone the most comments on this poem.I’ll Fly, so much love…

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  1. jennis5309 Avatar

    I really enjoyed this, especially the lines, “with silver cufflinks/ chained to the free/ engaged for their own sacred prosperity.” Great job!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you Jennis5309

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you sameernahar

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  2. Words We Women Write Avatar

    broken legs, learned to fly…..puts me in mind of the character Charlotte in the book The Invention of Wings by Sue Monk Kidd. A strong woman, โ€œeverything she knew came from living on the scarce side of mercy.โ€ Love your poetry. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you love your work as well, haven’t heard of Sue Monk Kidd,
      I’ll look her up thanks again…

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  3. jjz3 Avatar

    “Parting the mud between the soul and body…” Perfect. I can feel this one. Thanks.

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