Tranquil #1Planting

tree space

in my soul.

Tilling

watered holes

turning over anew.

Gardening

inward growth

preparing for harvest.

As (April )National Poetry Month is quickly passing- I am blessed today with all goodness and kind words, flowing on my blog and others(such positive goodness) . Please visit if you haven’t

Day Twenty-Seven

The dedication bloggers have-its in our blood. I understand this habit of writing and sharing. As (my grand) daddy would say  Howdy-“keep milking the cows,chase a hens or two that’s good livin!”… I am thankful for this space to write. There is nothing more beautiful,when I look around and see love…

And today’s prompt – optional, as always — comes to us from Vince Gotera. It’s the hay(na)ku). Created by the poet Eileen Tabios and named by Vince, the hay(na)ku is a variant on the haiku. A hay(na)ku consists of a three-line stanza, where the first line has one word, the second line has two words, and the third line has three words. You can write just one, or chain several together into a longer poem. For example, you could write a hay(na)ku sonnet, like the one that Vince himself wrote back during NaPoWriMo 2012!

Happy writing!

14 responses

  1. marilyncavicchia Avatar

    Really nice! Your stanzas work by themselves and as a whole, too, and your line breaks make sense — mine just broke where the form told them to. 🙂

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    1. Visionariekind Avatar

      thank you kindly ❤

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  2. Fatmawaty Avatar

    I don’t know about Haiku. What’s it?

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      so a haiku is a very short poem usually broken down on every line- one word on the fist, two words on the second line and then only three words on the last line

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      1. Fatmawaty Avatar

        Oh,,, I see. Do you know Sis, I wrote something without rules….. ha..ha… It’d be interesting, if I can write Haiku like you! 🙂

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      2. kneal1 Avatar

        oh I know you can do it lol….

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      3. Fatmawaty Avatar

        Thank you for your support. I’ll try to think….to write….and to post it….. If I don’t have idea, I give up…. he..he

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      4. kneal1 Avatar

        hehheee okay …

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      5. Fatmawaty Avatar

        Peace n Luv, Sis!

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      6. kneal1 Avatar

        peace and blessings my sis..much love -hugs its night here so I’m going to bed…before my kids wake…

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      7. Fatmawaty Avatar

        Sure….. Good night! Have a great dream! ❤

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  4. Mithai Mumblezz Avatar

    Thank you for liking my posts 🙂 I love all your poems 🙂 I’ve nominated you for Infinity Dream Award and Versatile Dream Award. Do have a look and write 7 facts about your self according to the guide lines of the game. Happy Blogging!!
    Thank you.

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      awe- thank you sorry I’m just reading this I took a break after blogging in April… I shall take a look and thank you so much Mithai Mumblezz

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