Up this morning feeling so good & happy

Thinking happy thoughts

Did a happy dance

Mixed in a little, raw sugar and Whip cream

Played all my happy records

Minded my own happy-bidness!

Sneezed a happy sneeze

Put on my best Springy-

Maxi-dress

Walked off my happy porch

And…

Lawd have Mercy!

A flat

Tire!

This is a play on a Poem by Jackie Earley “One Thousand Nine-Hundred & sixty-Eight Winters” It’s a favorite poem of mine.

Our prompt today (optional, as always), will hopefully provide you with a bit of Friday fun. Today, I challenge you to write a parody or satire based on a famous poem. It can be long or short, rhymed or not. But take a favorite (or unfavorite) poem of the past, and see if you can’t re-write it on humorous, mocking, or sharp-witted lines. You can use your poem to make fun of the original (in the vein of a parody), or turn the form and manner of the original into a vehicle for making points about something else (more of a satire – though the dividing lines get rather confused and thin at times).

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10 responses

  1. Kiana Donae Avatar

    Beautifully done

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you Kiana Donae

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  2. CC Champagne Avatar
    CC Champagne

    I can almost picture the woman doing these things… It put a smile on my face for sure!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you CC Champagne

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  3. shadowprancer Avatar

    Really funny! Isn’t that how it always goes? Minding you’re own business and then life happens!

    http://goo.gl/2pJWE3

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      right indeed it does…

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  4. Shell Ochsner Avatar
    Shell Ochsner

    Oh my goodness! “Sneezed a happy sneeze” Clever and amusing. This is one of my favorites!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you Shell Ochsner,glad you liked it ,much love to you…

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  5. Usha Pisharody Avatar

    Such a happy poem, and yes, right down to the Lawd! A Flat tyre 🙂
    Thank you for the visit, and comment left on my blog 🙂

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Thank you Usha Pisharody, much love to you..

      Like

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