Today I saw the rain landings pregnant with drops of love

saturating empty                                                                                        riverbeds

The sky sang

The pinecones swam in the wind

All the while peaty soiled-souls tried to stay alive again.

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  1. Yusra Gulab Jamman 🍰 🐒 Avatar

    Gorgeous visuals in this piece! I felt really nostalgic while reading this 🙂

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you so much Yusra Gulab Jamman

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  2. Jan Brown Avatar

    “Pregnant with drops of love…” What gorgeous language!!!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      such kinds words, Jan Brown thank you

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  3. terryb Avatar

    A wonderful spring poem! I love the imagery! … “rain landings pregnant with drops of love” … “peaty soiled-souls tried to stay alive again.” 🙂

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you Terryb much love to you love your photos and writings…

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      1. terryb Avatar

        You’re welcome and thank you! Kudos to you for tackling Napowrimo… Maybe I will have the time and courage to try it next time 🙂
        Blessings ❤

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      2. kneal1 Avatar

        thank you, I always enjoy your Poetry yes please do Napowrimo is a beast for 30 days(but I think you’d like it) … Enjoy your day…Much love…

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      3. terryb Avatar

        Good luck with the next couple of weeks. I’ll try and keep up as a reader 🙂

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      4. kneal1 Avatar

        awe, thanks Terryb best wishes on your photo’s much love and many blessings

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