Inflamed earthquakes

                   Invisible to my cry

                   I saw love tenderly tending,

Exchanging her life for me

I saw love marching to a lovers’ drum

I saw love hanging between two thieves

With vinegar stained lips

“The Temple’s Veil” torn in two

“Forgive them,” that’s what I saw love do!

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  1. themissiontomars Avatar

    Ohh Kneal!! that’s so nice 🙂 definitely only love can forgive.. 🙂 i so loved reading this one out..you got the magic of love ❤

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you so much Rosalyn, Yes you bit us good with love, I had to go for round two,I’m all smiles ,sending much Love to you and many blessings…Peace

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      1. themissiontomars Avatar

        Pleasures have been all mine..thanks indeed 🙂
        Stay happy 🙂

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  2. Christy Birmingham Avatar

    So unique and lovely!

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      Thanks so much Christy Birmingham

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  3. Fatmawaty Avatar

    Dear kneal, I just nominated you for Blog Tour, please visit the link : https://ishlahii.wordpress.com/2015/03/30/the-blog-tour-award/
    Hope you can take part in this blog tour! Thank you! ❤

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      oh thank you so much, I would be happy to participate and I’m glad you’ve given us some time to fulfill this
      request. Peace many blessings I’ll be working on this…

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      1. Fatmawaty Avatar

        You’re most welcome my dear sis! Yes please do!
        I’d love to hear about your writing process, my sister! You are a great poet, indeed! 💗
        Thank you for your kind words! Luv you!

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  4. JAEL Avatar

    This delivers a powerful impact–particularly the ending. WOW.

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  5. DrSwag Avatar

    …Cool beans….The amazing sacrifice of divine love…..

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    1. kneal1 Avatar

      thank you DrSwag ..(I haven’t heard cool beans in a minute) many blessings to you…

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      1. DrSwag Avatar

        ..You have flow my sister…a river of nard that sweetens the senses, blesses the soul…..

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      2. kneal1 Avatar

        aww too kind ,love your work…

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      3. DrSwag Avatar

        ..Thanks maam..

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